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txaschainsaw
02-13-2009, 02:08 PM
Let me know what you think

http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/3526/mybanner4995d9bcac4d3qy3.jpg (http://www.mybannermaker.com/link.php?nurl=http%3A%2F%2Fwww.mybannermaker.com)

mikeq91
02-13-2009, 05:00 PM
very cool idea, the only thing is that the bottom line is a bit hard to read because of the light coming through the windows... but other than that i like the idea

Haunts of Richmond
02-13-2009, 10:18 PM
1.) "Are you a sinner?" - This should be in a larger font.

2.) "Then welcome to the House of Sin" - Change the font type to something a bit creeper. You can find scary looking fonts online. What about putting: "Then welcome to the...." in one font. And then "HOUSE OF SIN" in another, larger font?

3.) "Where All of Your Nightmares Become Reality" - This font should be a smaller type. And watch the white font on white background... makes it difficult to read. You can also take out the "of" and just say: "Where All Your Nightmares Become Reality."

Hope this helps. Good luck!

tchaunt
02-13-2009, 11:03 PM
I think the banner is a bit.........bland. It doesn't look bad (besides the 'e' in where being white font on a white background), but it just doesn't catch my eye. I agree that you need to change the font to a different style.